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here is my story

Once upon a time .....there once lived two little frudge minnies. Everyone who say them would say they were cute and delisious. They would try to get close to them to smell and maybe a taste. but the minnies were smart they would not get close to no one. But one day, a young boy came up to them and had somee icecream. the minnies eye's got big and they wanted to taste the icecream but the boy said no. the minnies kept asking and the boy fine gave in. just as a wink of an eye. the boy ate both of the minnies.